A few things I have seen that stick out to me. First off as per Dante, Dusty hanshaw, the dc dvd with Jason wojo rest pause is 15 deep breaths as your pause, which will usually take around 45 seconds. Not much shorter than that. If you are training at full intensity this will even seem like it’s not enough time.
Also your rep ranges on some of these seem off. 10-30reps? I don’t remember that. Usually it is a range with a 5 rep variance, like 10-15 as you have for your bench press.
For legs no widowmaker set?
I do not see any extreme stretches in your program. These are a very important part of this training and should also be progressively overloaded like the exercises are. Do not leave these out if your are training dc. Not only are they great for growth, but they prevent injuries and with this style of training you risk injury a lot more.
For all the info on the stretches, layout and more check out intensemuscle there is minimal activity on there but all of Dante’s original stuff is still there iirc. Also follow dantetrudels Instagram. He posts gems on there. For videos you can always watch dusty hanshaws YouTube channel. He posts his training videos using dc training so you can see it in motion and watch how he implements the stretches.
For dc training you need a log book. Every session you should be progressing. If you stall, you have to switch out that exercise for something else.
To me this is not the most optimal on a cut because you need adiquate nutrients to recover and you need to progressively overload your nutrition as well. Lift heavier, eat more, grow more. That is whole point. If you still want to give it a shot read on the intense muscle post about cardio and fat loss.