Thanx man, making progress. Here's a better one, w/o the background. I'm posting this one up to show pointedly where I need to make the most improvements..
Still have some work to do as you can see, but I'm feeling the body revving up to bring it in straight. Plus, got the best products in the world on my side in USP! Can't wait to show how much progress can be made in 17 days..