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    Quote Originally Posted by BodyWizard View Post
    Text is over-complex: rephrase as short, focused, punchy phrases.

    Example:

    READY To GROW, GAIN STRENGTH, SPEED RECOVERY?
    WE HAVE WHAT YOU NEED!
    IGNITE A WHOLE NEW TRANSFORMATION DOWN ON THE PHARM...
    MUSCLE PHARM

    No criticism intended, bro - I have no photoshop skills; just trying to help...

    I agree but there are key words in this industry that are darn near required to sell an add. I bet if you lok at 10 add youll find these words...
    mass
    power/strength
    lean
    pending product add,
    recovery
    growth

    No need for the clearification, we are here to be criticized. Input helps.

    Thanks

    EDIT: Also, since we are all helping eachother. It seems to me MP stays away from the "farm" type farm more of the medical pharm idea. The Farm type is a bit lame to me, although i almost put somethin like...."Ready to grow by the Pharm rather than grow it?"

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    Did some editing:
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    I kinda liked this, but I can't seem to get anything I absolutely love.

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    Ifeel it's goimg to be a combo of several. A lot of really great ideas.

    It's been sometime since a product line really stood up to what it claims...

    Big Thank you to MP....
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    damn you beastmode, had to go and raise the bar!
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    Quote Originally Posted by GetDatFool View Post
    damn you beastmode, had to go and raise the bar!
    haha ill take that as a compliment... i have a few more ideas rolling around in my head... just have to find the time to sit
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    Quote Originally Posted by Orangepeel View Post
    I kinda liked this, but I can't seem to get anything I absolutely love.


    are these bulk powders from china?!?!?! haha just kiddin bro, looks solid.
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    It seems like the wordings the only thing I really want to keep about these adds, but I'll come up with something I really like one of these times.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MentalTwitch View Post
    are these bulk powders from china?!?!?! haha just kiddin bro, looks solid.
    Ha, I was tryin to get a matrixy theme ha.
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    dang you guys are pulling out the stops!
    i still havent seen the gym bag or the what shaker comes with but if its anything like the labels or the shirts its gonna be real Bad Ass!
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    Battle fuel... let me know what you guys think

    EDIT: Id like to put some more jargon into it, but ill get to that later ha
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    Quote Originally Posted by BeastMode View Post
    Battle fuel... let me know what you guys think

    nice. but had to act like a dikc but is that your pic? MP would be f'd if thats from a movie or show or something. Nonethe less, nice layout/idea.
    I was thinking of going single product but no ood ideas came yet....
    I do love BulletProof concept though(sleep-aid)...
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    Quote Originally Posted by MentalTwitch View Post
    nice. but had to act like a dikc but is that your pic? MP would be f'd if thats from a movie or show or something. Nonethe less, nice layout/idea.
    I was thinking of going single product but no ood ideas came yet....
    I do love BulletProof concept though(sleep-aid)...
    no not my pic... i know that there would be a little issue, but I just had to use the pic none-the-less, it just fit the image in my head

    but, i could locate another good pic for it, not very difficult to duplicate none the less.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BeastMode View Post
    no not my pic... i know that there would be a little issue, but I just had to use the pic none-the-less, it just fit the image in my head

    yea it works. See if you can find something close and just add your own fire, cityline, etc and your gold. Not sure what program youre using or how familiarwith them you are. I know the basics of Photoshop CS4 thats it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by MentalTwitch View Post
    yea it works. See if you can find something close and just add your own fire, cityline, etc and your gold. Not sure what program youre using or how familiarwith them you are. I know the basics of Photoshop CS4 thats it.
    yeah ill locate something, and edit it, soon enough
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    what ever happend to this? any deadlines?
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    Ton of great ideas!
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    Quote Originally Posted by MentalTwitch View Post
    what ever happend to this? any deadlines?
    ....No deadline has been posted, but I think everyone is starting to get a little curious....
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    Just keep them coming if you have ideas, we are just waiting for some of the other forums to slow down on the entries before we put a definite deadline. Most likely we will give you guys a heads up before we stop taking entries and then we will compile the entries and vote on them at the MP forums.
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    any updates?
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    I just sent a message about the deadline to the owner so I will relay what info he gives me.
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    Alright guys the dead line for entries will be this Wednesday, then we will collectively review the entries and announce a winner sometime next weekend.
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    This by far was a great idea! Great work everyone!

    Good Luck
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    Alright guys, we are narrowing it down right now to the cream of the crop. No more entries are allowed and I will have some more information shortly....
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    Any names of the few that made the cut?

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    Quote Originally Posted by BeastMode View Post
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    I would replace my "Muscle Pharms" test at top with your actual text format. I would also add the web URL at the bottom somewhere. Just through this together quick.
    Alright guys these are the two finalist from AM. We are going to hold a vote at the MP forums to choose a final winner. There will be entries from all the different forums and I will include the link once we get it all together.
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    I like them...nothing really to flashy about them and all about the product!

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    intensoty lol.
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    Quote Originally Posted by pmiller383 View Post
    Alright guys these are the two finalist from AM. We are going to hold a vote at the MP forums to choose a final winner. There will be entries from all the different forums and I will include the link once we get it all together.
    Awesome!!! Thanks MP, and I cant wait for the vote/results.
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    Update????
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    Just waiting for the bb.com guys to pick their top choices. I will get on them a little bit..
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    Sweet contest MP... too bad i'm not creative
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    is this still going on?
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    Quote Originally Posted by BeastMode View Post
    is this still going on?
    Just waiting on the final decision, I will be in touch with both you and MT in the next few days so check your PM's
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    Beastmode and MentalTwitch PM me your addresses, we have a little consolation prize for you.
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    Great work...looking forward to seeing this in print.

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